Whitty07's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[STK] The Asylum (WIP)]

Drums a bit too loud.

Other than the drums being a bit loud i don't think its mastered that bad.

SteakJohnson responds:

thankyous

[Caramel Oasis]

Ehh. Mastering. Its your friend....

I gave you a 3/5 and a 7/10. My advice work on your mastering. And your drum loops could really use some help. Not too bad otherwise. You got something now make the instruments all balanced and you'll be on your way to a 5/5 and 10/10.

[Sunlight ...DJ-Solaris...]

Good song

Good song but the name is taken already lol, I would give you a link to the youtube post of this song but i'm afraid I would get my account deleted. Type this in on youtube and you shoud get it, Breakfast - The Sunlight (Original Mix)

djsolaris responds:

its hard to find a name thats not taken

[No Words [altonefour]]

Good

Its good tho it more a of a trance song i think, or at least thats what it feels like. Like it should be a rave rather than a club. It's good tho!

aryst0krat responds:

GOOD CALL. I changed it. :3

[euthanasia]

Needs Some Mastering.

It's not bad, it really just needs to be mastered better. Also spell check is a cool feature.

adavism responds:

yeah i master my song but i mixed them to sound best though my set up for live events so what sounds lil shitty on your speaker sound clear and great through my house speakers. bout the spelling never said it always been my best subject so idc lol

[Havoc · (Techno)]

Good except for one thing

This song is missing sound in the lower range, and some of the automation feels to sudden. If you made it a bit more subtle at parts and added a low end instrument like a deep bassline and made the kick deeper it would be top notch. -Whitty

teleiaskentix responds:

Try listening to it with Headphones, I'd assume you listened on speakers.

I made it on headphones for headphones, which is why it might seem to lack depth.

The 2nd lead is a Bass sound.. But I don't use it like a bass. Thanks for input, though.

[Song # 6 (T.O.F)]

Nice

Liked the mix in with the 8 bit sounds- Whitty 4/5 9/10

[The Pinapple & The Screwdriver]

very nice

I enjoyed that very much, keep up the great work!
10/10 5/5

[Red Magenta]

I liked it very much

9/10 4/5 i liked it, three things for ya, one, the song has a couple of points where the main theme and a few other sounds get annoyingly loud compared to the rest of the song, Two it seems very repetitive, i feel like there should be a secondary theme thrown in at some point. Three, an interesting thing you might want to try is side chaining the main pad to the kick beat. That being said i enjoyed it :)

Coda9 responds:

yea i was just thinking after i submitted it that i should of did something with the kick. ill change it now XD

[-Diziness and Discord-]

seems a bit dry and off beat at times

The sounds don't really reach out and grab you, and much of the timing is way off on your instruments and drum loops. I mean the title describes it almost too well...

nameless11 responds:

Yeah I know what you mean..especially on the drum loops.
I tried to fix this issue and resubmit but for some reason I cant get the timing right, I must have messed up the tempo or something. Anyway thanks for the review.